haiku... Bent but Not Broken

[missmanners]

sitting in darkness
sharp cold revenge in my hand
do not turn your back



mm

 

[Caitriona]

Oh I like that!

 

[The Question]

Patient, unceasing
Always onward, always still
Undeniable

 

[Bladev1]

Anger, frustration
beating fists, gnashing teeth
ALIVE

 

[Bladev1]

should we break out the berets and bogo drums?

 

[The Question]

Anger, frustration
beating fists, gnashing teeth
ALIVE

You had it on the first line, it started slipping in the second, but it fell off and landed in a puddle on the third.

Here is how it goes
Five syllables, seven, five
That's how haiku works.

 

[BLANK_SKAN]

5-7-5 OK

TWINKIES BOILING IN
MANCHESTER IN SUMMER YES
SADNESS AND NO FRIENDS

 

[The Question]

Skan, you piece of shit
Go back to DayCare, you twat
You suck like a whore

 

[Bladev1]

You had it on the first line, it started slipping in the second, but it fell off and landed in a puddle on the third.

Here is how it goes
Five syllables, seven, five
That's how haiku works.

Gitcha...Haiku always intrigued me but I never quite got it.

 

[Big Dick McGee]

Green warmth underfoot
Diamond-dotted blackness above
Love draws its first breath

 

[keekeen]

Come hither you bitch
Make me a ham sandwich now
Then lie down a while

 

[keekeen]

Flows through the path for
naught pours before the sunrise
water falls deep within

 

[Blindgroping]

Here We Go Again
Poetry for a dumb-ass
Can I have my Tea?

 

[keekeen]

Flows through the path for
naught pours before the sunrise
water falls deep now

 

[Blindgroping]

Crumpets that I made,
with peanut butter and jam,
Were quite good, thank you.

 

[keekeen]

Cleopatra dear
Why have you not come to me
for some good loving

 

[Blindgroping]

Cleopatra's gone.
Mark Anthony awaits her
Underneath palm leaves.

 

[The Question]

Not Marc Anthony
I'm the one who did the girl
Once I buried Marc.

 

[keekeen]

Cleo's a greedy
whore. She walks the burgs looking
for a trick or two.

 

[keekeen]

Rose petals plucked bare
devoid of displeasure so
rare my river flows.